Your eyes take me
deep inside your soul.
When you gaze into my eyes
I feel I am whole.
When our eyes are locked
I see the piece of my heart you stole.
(image credit – current.org)
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Written for the weekend Trifextra Challenge: And now your Trifextra prompt. This weekend, writers, it’s up to you. We want you to choose a word and use it three times in your 33 words. However, it must be either a verb, noun or adjective and the form of the word cannot change, it must appear exactly the same three times. Please highlight your chosen word in your piece before linking up below. Happy writing! – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.lBfgSjro.dpuf
as a self professed ROMANTIC, I loved this. Parts of me warmed and my heart nodded.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Thanks very much. You too!
Lovely image. Nicely done.
Thank you.
Great final line!
thanks Janna!
Eyes! My weakness!!! I love everything romantic and these beautiful words. Eyes do speak to the soul.
They certainly do – I have the same weakness. Thanks for the comment. 🙂
Beautiful poem. It has texture and feeling. Great job.
Thank you very much.
Love everything about this…
thank you!
Very beautifully written.
Thank you very much.
So romantic -loved it!
Lovely – wistful, not quite sad, but with a thread of pain in their. Very nice.
Thank you very much.