In my Head – Trifecta Challenge

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Posted on February 1, 2013

This post is for the new Trifecta challenge – For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.

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“It really is as beautiful as they said it would be.”

“Do you feel happy?”

“I feel a sense of peace I never had before . It really is Heaven.”

“I miss you, dad.“

39 thoughts on “In my Head – Trifecta Challenge”

February 1, 2013 at 16:37 deanabo says:

Extremely beautiful. This really touched me.

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- February 1, 2013 at 16:38 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you. He was never truly happy with himself when he was here. I like to think that changed.
  
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February 1, 2013 at 16:59 diannegray says:

Just lovely – I remember having several dream conversations like this a few years ago after my dad died. It really is a beautiful place…

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- February 1, 2013 at 17:01 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you. I agree it is beautiful and I’m sure my dad is on a golf course somewhere. 🙂
  
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  - February 1, 2013 at 20:39 diannegray says:
    
    My dad loved golf – they’re probably playing a round together 😉
  - February 1, 2013 at 20:42 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
    
    What a happy thought. I’m going to keep that one with me. 🙂
  - February 1, 2013 at 23:12 diannegray says:
    
    😀
February 1, 2013 at 18:08 Libby says:

You took 33 words and created something beautiful 🙂

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- February 1, 2013 at 18:10 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Aw, thank you so much.
  
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February 1, 2013 at 19:56 Edward Hotspur says:

Awww, that was sad and beautiful…

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- February 1, 2013 at 19:57 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thanks….I miss him.
  
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February 1, 2013 at 20:09 joetwo says:

Wonderfully done!

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- February 1, 2013 at 20:10 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you very much.
  
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February 1, 2013 at 21:47 jannatwrites says:

This was beautiful. It is some comfort to think of our passed loved ones at peace in heaven.

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- February 1, 2013 at 21:50 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you. It gives me peace to think he is happy.
  
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February 1, 2013 at 22:56 barbara says:

we used to sing this in church:
Heaven is a wonderful place, Filled with Glory and Grace,
I want to see my Savior’s face Heaven is a wonderful,
Heaven is glorious, Heaven is a wonderful place.

think of your dad singing that – as he plays golf with diannegray’s dad. 🙂 Beautifully done.

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- February 1, 2013 at 23:01 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  I love it….thank you for sharing that.
  
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February 2, 2013 at 02:12 atrm61 says:

This is awesome-loved the emotional connect here-a great piece.

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- February 2, 2013 at 06:53 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you.
  
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  - February 2, 2013 at 10:03 atrm61 says:
    
    🙂
February 2, 2013 at 09:32 Draug419 says:

What a warm piece (:

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- February 2, 2013 at 09:40 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you.
  
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February 2, 2013 at 11:50 vivinfrance says:

If only…

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February 2, 2013 at 13:00 Corinne says:

I wanted to cry, here… because this is exactly the conversation I would have with my Dad. He’s still here, but we’ve talked about death in a very real way.

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- February 2, 2013 at 13:53 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Tell him you love him as often as you can.
  
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February 2, 2013 at 15:20 El Guapo says:

That’s a lot of emotion for 33 words.
Beautifully done!

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- February 2, 2013 at 15:24 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you very much.
  
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February 2, 2013 at 15:23 memyselfandela says:

Very beautiful. 🙂

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- February 2, 2013 at 15:25 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you.
  
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February 2, 2013 at 15:41 shoutabyss says:

I miss my dad, too. Very nice.

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- February 2, 2013 at 15:42 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you.
  
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February 2, 2013 at 16:01 Angie says:

Beautiful!!

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- February 2, 2013 at 16:01 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thanks Ang!
  
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February 3, 2013 at 06:30 trifectawriting says:

Touching and sad. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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- February 3, 2013 at 09:08 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you.
  
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February 3, 2013 at 08:43 christina says:

oh this tugged at my heart big time.

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- February 3, 2013 at 09:09 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Aw, thanks for reading.
  
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February 3, 2013 at 17:28 sagedoyle says:

Very touching 😦

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- February 3, 2013 at 17:28 Polysyllabic Profundities says:
  
  Thank you.
  
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