The basin at the bottom of the waterfall would always dazzle my reality and expand my myopic view of what beauty can truly look like. The naked man swimming there didn’t hurt either.
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(image credit: hunkdujour.com)
And on again to the weekend Trifextra Challenge: On to the weekend prompt. This weekend we’re asking you to add thirty of your own words to the following three words for a total of thirty-three. Good luck!
myopic
dazzle
basin
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At least you didn’t judge the man for the inevitable shrinkage.
well done. I love the delivery.
Thank you….and in my mind, the water was very warm so shrinkage was not an issue. 🙂
Love that 😉
Thanks!
Ha! Not at all what I was expecting. Great write.
🙂 Thank you.
Glad to find out the water was warm 😉 Love that had me thinking of a waterfall’s beauty then turned it around on me with the last line. Great work!
🙂 Thank you.
A fun twist at the end. Nicely done!
Thanks Momo!
Hahaah Would not mind that atall!
Me neither, Kymm!! 🙂
Sounds like you have met the Neck.. a mythical creature set to lure innocent maidens into the water 🙂
He’s certainly doing his job!!
But mostly the waterfall, right? 🙂 Thanks for linking up with this one. It gave me a laugh.
🙂 Glad you enjoyed it!
Luckily for you, it was a male model in the water and not a male writer like me! 🙂 That would have changed the tone of your story in a heartbeat, for sure. Thanks for a fun read.
Fantastic! That last line left a smile on my face. Great work!
*hahaha* This totally cracked me up. Not the first time you’ve done that to me. 🙂 Great job!