Divorce existed in their near future. Her words still hung heavily in the air and pummeled his eardrums with the weight of their meaning. It had finally been uttered aloud and it was no longer an idle threat that they were reaching the demise of their relationship. The reality suffocated him. His gambling had driven a wedge between them and he refused to get help for a problem he didn’t think defined him.
As he entered the casino, the familiar sound of bells and machines soothed him. He was home. He had never felt more at ease than he did in this concrete tomb of cacophony. Each of the dealers knew him by name but he only took that to be a sign of professionalism and not a reflection of addiction. The Craps table beckoned and he succumbed to its welcoming embrace.
The dice were magical. His fours ‘hard-ways’ hit over and over and the stack of chips increased exponentially in front of him. New rollers took their place and his stack continued to grow. Luck was certainly being a lady tonight. After what must have been hours he asked dealer to color him up, he collected his chips and cashed them in.
He was given the high-roller suite and stood on the balcony with the wad of bills. He didn’t want the cashier to tell him how much he had won when he cashed out. The wind tousled his hair and in one swift movement he cast the money over the edge of the balcony. The rain of bills spread swiftly through the air and littered the ground below. The crowd preparing to enter the casino pecked at the bills like chickens at their feed.
She may have taken half of his life, but she wasn’t getting half of his winnings.
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Written for the Trifecta challenge (and the photo was taken on my one and only cruise – I didn’t win the money, but my friend did!)
1: to pour down
2: to give or administer abundantly <rained blows on his head>
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I love love love “concrete tomb of cacophony” (: Although it seems quite stupid of him to toss away half of his winnings when he’s already tossing it away in gambling!
Thanks….that just made me smile!!
Poor misguided soul!Sad that he does not see what his problem is but then who knows,maybe his wife was a real witch!Great job,as always:-)
Thank you!
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Oh ,btw,loved the line,” The crowd preparing to enter the casino pecked at the bills like chickens at their feed.” 😀
🙂 Thanks again!
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Fabulous!! Felt like I was right there at the craps table… ((I miss Vegas… )) Great post!! XO ~ Jen
Thanks very much! I’ve never been to Vegas….but it’s on my list. 🙂
I like this one, Susan! Great job!
Thanks Daddy!!
I love how you pulled me into the story!
Are you the lucky roller??
no, but I felt like I was there! lol
Lol….awesome! Thank you. 🙂
Awesome! Did you roll around in it too?
She wouldn’t let me. 😦 I just got to take pictures of it.
Well, that’s something.
I thought it would have looked much nicer in my bank account, but she disagreed.
That’s mean.
Right??
Wow, Wow, Wow! What a brilliant story! LOVE IT 😀
Thank you so much!
I really like the way he feels at home in the casino. It rang true as addiction.
btw, made me think of this piece from This American Life (it’s Act Two: Joe the limo driver):
http://www.thisamericanlife.org/radio-archives/episode/233/starting-from-scratch
Thanks for the comment. I’ll be sure to check out the link.
I have a sister who lives in Las Vegas, and is on the verge of a divorce. The husband is addicted more to alcohol than to gambling, but that’s in there too. Well told story that could actually occur in the near future of my sister’s life. Sad, but true.
Addiction is a horrible beast. I left my ex for the same reason and my mom is in end stage liver failure as well. It’s awful.
Perfect revenge. But I would have squirreled some of that away for a rainy day. At the mall.
I’ll meet you there!! 🙂