The wall remains the same – Trifecta Challenge

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My desires lay buried under a shroud of mistrust.

My resolve, firm.

Hidden feelings will be anchored there.

Not even the strongest of wills can worm the truth from me.

The walls remain.

~~

Written for this week’s Trifecta Challenge: Now on to the weekly challenge.  Remember, we’re now looking for exactly 33 words.
Good luck and happy writing!

WORM (transitive verb)

1a :  to proceed or make (one’s way) insidiously or deviously<worm their way into positions of power     — Bill Franzen>
 :  to insinuate or introduce (oneself) by devious or subtle means
 :  to cause to move or proceed in or as if in the manner of a worm
:  to wind rope or yarn spirally round and between the strands of (a cable or rope) before serving

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16 thoughts on “The wall remains the same – Trifecta Challenge

  1. It can be difficult to tear down those walls. Wonderful word choices here, especially the visual this line creates… “buried under a shroud of mistrust.”

  2. Well worked words, wonderfully… Sorry, got stuck on “w” for a minute.
    I really enjoyed this piece! I’m constantly in awe of the writers who can do so much with so little.

  3. What Lance said. You’ve been doing some really impressive writing lately. 🙂 I love the last line, the way it flows out of the rest. Really, really good piece.

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