She always said to look for her after she passed.
She would be visible and show me a great circle of love.
I was only a child then,
but after she died
the first planet I saw through my telescope was Saturn.
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You had me at telescope 🙂 Saturn rings…a nice touch!
Lol – thanks! 🙂
Beautiful. I love Saturn so it’s inclusion on the prompt was especially lovely. ☺
Thanks very much.
Oh, this is great.
Could’ve also been Pluto. Have you seen that icy planet’s heart? 😉
Thank you. Maybe I should get myself a telescope for Christmas. 😉
I like the line, “circle of love.” Nice take on the prompt! Incorporating a planetary ring into a meaningful story isn’t easy.
Thanks very much. I appreciate that.
Lovely take on the prompt!
Thank you. 🙂
Aw, that’s sweet. I once received a message from my dog after he died. Or at least my eight year old mind thought I did.
You probably did. 🙂
I loved this!
Thanks very much!
Oh, I love that. That’s really beautiful. Wonderfully crafted!
Thanks very much. I appreciate that!