Through the lens



She always said to look for her after she passed.

She would be visible and show me a great circle of love.

I was only a child then,

but after she died

the first planet I saw through my telescope was Saturn.



16 thoughts on “Through the lens

  1. I like the line, “circle of love.” Nice take on the prompt! Incorporating a planetary ring into a meaningful story isn’t easy.

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