The first time I saw him my breath caught in my throat. He brought the glass to his lips and drank his wine. I’m sure he could hear my heart beat as his blue eyes met with mine.
Written for the Trifecta Challenge – We are asking for a 33-word response to the following snippet:
The first time I saw. . .
Here’s the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each. We’re going low-brow on your this week. Or not. Can you class it up under these restrictions? Give us your best.
To clarify, we are giving you 5 words. We want another 33 from you, for a grand total of 38. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.woOfZLoR.dpuf
Ooo! Was this a sighting across a crowded room?
At least a crowded bar….does that count?
It pales in comparison to your bar stories….but I’ll leave those to the Master!! 🙂
There’s actually one more I still need to write down – the Naked Bar Slide, which will also finally explain that small scar above my left nipple that I’m emailed about so often…
Ooh, I’ll make sure I have the wine on standby for that one!!
Soooo romantic! I love it (but I’m also partial to blue eyes)!!!
Thank you – and me too!!
wow very nice
Wow, I know why you fell for that one… Lovely write. Thanks for linking up!
Thanks very much. I’ve been sick for a few weeks and not doing much writing – it’s nice to be back!!
Well done – I find the single syllable ones really hard to write 😀
Thanks very much! 🙂
Sweet. I melted at the last line.
I can feel the giddiness of new love. Well done.
Thanks very much.
Nothing quite like those electric moments when the world seems to contract and peripheral vision gets all out of focus and there is nothing else anywhere that matters except you and that person whose eyes you’ve locked on to. You captured that moment very well. 🙂
Thank you so much….and I love your description of that moment!!
My my! Gorgeously dashing lines.
Thank you so much. 🙂
Ah… that first rush of emotion, perhaps love at first sight.
If we were all so lucky!
This is cool.