Suspended animation


Time slows.

The air is chilled.

My breath lingers as vapor

and I feel you near.

Neither tick nor tock

echo in the hallway.

Hands are frozen and each clock, like you,

is suspended between life and death.

Which light is stronger?


Written for the Gargleblaster at YeahWrite.


This week’s ultimate question was suggested by Erica M, and comes from Alice Munro’s short story A Real Life.

Have all your clocks stopped?

Give us your answer in 42 words. You don’t need to include the question in your response, but make sure your answer stands alone. What do we mean? Write down the question. Write down your response. Now cover the question with your hand and read your answer out loud. Does it still make sense when you don’t know the question? That’s what we’re looking for. Be creative, and remember: no family allowed!

32 thoughts on “Suspended animation

  1. This: “Hands are frozen and each clock, like you, is suspended between life and death” is amazing writing.

  2. ah yes, this is very poignant for me, in this space I am living in right now.
    The soul knows the way it wants to go, we are just waiting on it many times.

    beautiful imagery and words.

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