The saloon doors met in the middle several times before slowing to a close. Deke extinguished exterior lights before leaving for home. His fluffy robe and slippers waited just where he had left them. The Dude Ranch had closed for another season.
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I really love that first line. I could almost hear those doors swinging.
Way to set the scene!! I could see it in my mind’s eye.
Thank you. 🙂
Lovely descriptions.
Thank you very much.
The barroom swinging doors were perfect imagery of the old west, so the fuffy robe and slippers were completely unexpected. Nicely done.
Thanks Joe. Congratulations. Your win is well deserved.
Thank you. 🙂