“They said if I got closer to God, I would feel her with me. I don’t feel her.”
She leaned in closer, “You don’t have to climb this high, she’s always with you.”
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Inspired by this week’s Trifextra challenge:
For this weekend’s prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the following picture. Good luck!
polysyllabic profundities 
I love that you called god a she not a he. I love that.
Sometimes you just need someone to point it out to you. Lovely piece!
Thank you!
Interesting that your piece reflects the expression of their postures in the photo. Nicely done.
Thanks very much.
Lovely! Beautiful mood in this piece. Great take on the prompt!
Thank you!
I like this. It packs a lot of punch but is so simple at the same time.
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“You don’t have to climb this high” – I could feel a smile in this line. Nicely done!
Thank you so much.
Lovely thought expressed here and well written.
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Wonderful innocence to this piece… An untold pain… Excellent one.
Thank you so much.
This is just a brilliantly written… love the dialogue that manage to say so much,
Thank you. I really appreciate that.